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PLEASE CRITIQUE ^ I want to get better!

Hi, so this is my first attempt at a human rendering for a board game I'm working on. I do renderings of architecture professionally but people have always been such a challenge. I have a rough draft of this guy^ that would crack you up. That's why if you have any feedback/input good or critical I'd love to hear it, I'm taking notes! This is one of about 5 images at least to come for the game for anyone interested.

Thank you!
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I really like the shadering here, looks very realistic. The lights and shades are well done. And I love the tension in his pose, he really seems to carry the armor, not pretending it's weight-less.

His right foot though seems somehow off, I think it misses a shadow somewhere. Like it's not in contact with the ground. Or too light. 

For the rest, great work.